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Wishes come true by ~DeidarasMine:iconDeidarasMine:



I came up with this story 2 months ago and now its time to put on here. It’s about Gaara making a wish. If you have any questions ask me in the comment or send a note. Here we go.

It was 1;00 am and there was a lonely heart broken boy with cherry red hair, light blue eyes and a cut above his right eye in the shape of love, in Japanese. The boy, named Gaara, had black circles around his eyes, carelessly looking up at the full moon and one little tear in his right eye. As he looked left of the moon he saw a shooting star. He remembered two years ago, when he was 2, temari said to him, “When you see a shooting star, remember to make a wish.” Gaara closed his eye and said, “I wish for a sister younger than me, one that cared for me and loved me like my mom would have…if only the demon-raccoon didn’t get sealed inside me. To give me these black rings around my eyes and make everyone run in fear of me.”  Gaara opened his eyes again and got up. He started to go down the side of the roof with his chakura (sorry cant spell :XD: ) . As it started to rain Gaara climbed down the side of the house onto the balcony, and inside to his non-used room.

8 years later ~~~~
Gaara walked out onto the balcony looking off onto the village he was soon going to take over, becoming the Kazekage. He looked down at the people walking around. At once he saw a beautiful girl with blonde, long slivery hair, light blue eyes, wearing a cherry red long sleeved shirt with dark pants, holding a red rose in her hand…headed towards his house! He ran down the stairs into the hall way and opened the door before she knocked on it. “Uh-hi…your gaara right?” said the blonde haired girl. “Yeah…who are you and what do you want?” said gaara as his eyes narrowed. “I’ve come to live with you… I’m your step- sister, Sumi.”  She said extending her arm with the rose in it, Gaara’s eyes widened…was his wish he made 8 years ago coming true? “C-come in…” He said stepping aside. Kankurou and temari stepped out of the living room and now coming into the hall way. “Hello. Who’s this gaara?” said Temari/ “that’s our step-sister sumi… I just found out about it.” Said gaara. “Th-That’s my step-sister? She’s so hot though! That can’t be true!” said Kankurou shocked. “I’m going to go take sumi upstairs.” Said gaara grabbing sumi’s hand and leading her up the stairs, down the dark hall and into a dark room that looked like it was not being used. “This is my room, last room down the hall way, only one with a balcony. I don’t sleep so, here…” said gaara putting a blanket onto a bed. “… You can sleep on mine. Let me take that rose for you, I’ll go put in a vase.”  Sumi reached over behind gaara and gave him a hug. “Thanks… I knew you weren’t as mean as all the village people said you where. I think I will enjoy having you as a older brother… only by 3 months and 2 days.” Sumi said into gaara’s ear. Gaara felt a smile and a bit of blush creep onto his face. He was going to enjoy having a sister. And what do you know, Wishes do come true, even if it takes some time
©2007-2009 ~DeidarasMine
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Author's Comments

well there you go.sorry for the whole bunch of time skips. XD i got lazy.

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:iconreaper2111:
WOAH! this is awesome!!!! A+! and as a grand prize, you win a :cookie:

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in the grand stream of things, :fella: :gun: This is how it all ends.
:icondeidarasmine:
yay cookie ^^

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"MY EYES!!"
check out my story:
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GAARA'S MY SAND MUFFIN,
wooo i feel sad for itachi, my evil nii-chan <3 =O
:icongaara-iz-my-rabu:
awww....so sweet.
Blushie Gaara. im in looove.
:rose:

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"Why are all the badass dudes in anime short?"
"I can be as want as I drunkabee."
"The words 'shove it in deep like quicksand' brings to mind a very violent sex loving Gaara."
read my :icongallery:
:icondeidarasmine:
thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my second person to read my story!

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"MY EYES!!"
check out my story:
[link]
GAARA'S MY SAND MUFFIN,
wooo i feel sad for itachi, my evil nii-chan <3 =O
:iconsilvereyes-chan:
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Cuteness!
Poor Kankuro, having to deal with having a hot step sister! xD

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Fan of SarahxJareth

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Hardcore Harvest Moon fangirl! Fave bachelors: Julius, Gill, Chase, and Vaughn! <3

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Ladies, sing with me!
Vodka, we need some vodka~!
We need some vodka~!
WE NEED SOME VOOOOODDDDKKKKAAAAA~!
HEY!
:icondeidarasmine:
thanxxies!

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"MY EYES!!"
check out my story:
[link]
GAARA'S MY SAND MUFFIN,
wooo i feel sad for itachi, my evil nii-chan <3 =O
:icontobichigo:
can u write a prince herbert story?

jk

nice
:icondeidarasmine:
thanks

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"MY EYES!!"
check out my story:
[link]
GAARA'S MY SAND MUFFIN,
wooo i feel sad for itachi, my evil nii-chan <3 =O
:iconzuckaiy:
aaawww so sweet!!!!!

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"Quotes are just phrases people use to make themselves seem smarter than others!"
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"If you can't fix it...Break everything else!"
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